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PostSubject: The Phoenix   Sun Dec 13, 2009 6:27 pm

Wow it has been a while since I posted on here.
K so this is my most recent story. Hope you like it. FUCK YEAH SEAKING

THE PHOENIX

The once vividly coloured forest now lay flat and ebony; the thriving flora now either withered or reduced to ash. Previously, one would hear the light-hearted and undisturbed jests of forest creatures, but all was silent. The animals that would have once persisted to emit their unique sounds and frolic amongst the greenery were gone. The only sign of life was the spluttering creatures lying on the ground; the only movement was the eerie black smoke still left to linger and sway. The forest was silent. Not a sound, not a gesture. The fiery terror that had ripped through the helpless forest not an hour before had distorted the peaceful aura that once radiated.
From a crevice in the ground, a bar of charcoaled bark shifted slightly from its position. It was not a great motion, but the unearthly silence and lack of movement highlighted the tiniest details. Then it moved again, this time, more forcibly. As the ebony wood scratched slowly over the barren terrain, a leathery nose appeared from under it. It shuddered as it detected the bitter stench of persisting smoke. Despite the creatureís obvious disgust, it withdrew further from the burrow under the ground. First a short, furry snout, and then a whole head came to view. It continued to creep out from its safe house, until a wombat was completely visible. It slowly sidled over to a neighbouring burrow and let out a raspy groan, seeming to cry desperately for a response. The forest returned to silence, before another hoarse moan was heard from the burrow, and another wombat crawled out from it. The two wombats approached one another and nudged their noses together caringly. They had been reunited once more, after surviving the terror.
A loud, melancholic whistle emerged from the high branches of the charred remains of a tree. Sure enough, a brilliantly coloured rosella sat clenched on a branch, calling out and returning sound to the abnormally speechless forest. It continued to emit high-pitched, mournful signals out into the still trees, before slowly being joined simultaneously by further melancholy of other creatures. Slowly the forestís sounds began to return from the horror previously endured. As the forestís unnatural silence was brought back to the familiarity of the resonating whistles and groans, the forest continued its leisurely rebirth.
The ashen ground lay flat and colourless, as the creatures continued to emerge from their various hiding spots. Below the ground, however, the lush, green sprouts of returning bushes and grass slowly ascended to the surface. Soon enough, the forest would be once again filled with new, rich vegetation that had risen from the dark depths of a tragedy.
And, like a phoenix from the ashes, the forest began its beautiful and meaningful rebirth from the blazing cataclysm that naturally and inevitably befell it.
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PostSubject: Re: The Phoenix   Sun Dec 13, 2009 9:33 pm

oh btw.
The story was based on the really bad bushfires that occured last February in my state. Something like 200 dead. I entered it into a comp, and got it published in a book of the best short stories entered. I didn't win the $1000 + Wii though. :c xD
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PostSubject: Re: The Phoenix   Mon Dec 14, 2009 12:37 am

tl;dr















just kidding or am i

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PostSubject: Re: The Phoenix   Mon Dec 14, 2009 2:31 am

Ciruya wrote:
tl;dr















just kidding or am i
i definitely am not
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PostSubject: Re: The Phoenix   Mon Dec 14, 2009 3:05 am

HEY I REMEMBER READING THIS :D

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PostSubject: Re: The Phoenix   Mon Dec 14, 2009 9:37 am

When i read Ebony I thought "Porn" so then i stopped reading, then i read again and was like "wtf flora" so yeah
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PostSubject: Re: The Phoenix   Mon Dec 14, 2009 9:39 am

YOU GUYS ARE DICKS. I'M PUBLISHING THIS. THERE'S PROBABLY A FIRE IN SOCAL RIGHT NOW DESPITE THE WEATHER.
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PostSubject: Re: The Phoenix   Mon Dec 14, 2009 7:19 pm

Idrc if you read it or not. o3o I just posted it for the people who wanted to read it.

And lolwut@Roy publishing this. xD
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